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Topic: Fan Fiction: Forgotten Vows (part 70)


Topic Posted by: Rizia
Date Posted: Mon Oct 16 8:59:37 2006
Additional Comments: **** “Sean its beautiful,” Emily says kissing him excitingly. “well I wanted to give you something special for your birthday,” Sean states, and helps to put on the necklace for her. “it’s a shame you couldn’t have the night off tonight,” Sean was a bit disappointed. “I know, but I’m sure we can make it up throughout the whole day,” Emily mentions as Sean watches Bette and AJ walking in together to the Java web.

“and how’s my birthday girl doing!” Bette says coming up to Emily and hugging her very tightly. “mum, I can’t breath,” Emily exclaims. “well what’s this?” Bette asked, looking at the necklace on her daughter’s neck. “oh Sean gave this,” she said proud. “well I can say that didn’t come cheap. So what do you have planed for her then?” Bette questions. “well that’s for me to know Bette and for Ems to find out,” Sean mentions and grabs Emily hand in his to leave the place, but bumped into Leo…


**** “Mum, hey what brings you here?” Casey asked confused why his mother had come to his work place. Alex only smiled. “Casey, there’s something I need to talk to you about.” Casey realised it must have been important. “sure what is it?” “its about Gregory…”


**** sitting on the chair at his desk, Antonio was lost in thoughts. His mind swept back to the night when him and Ricardo went to Bens to find Maria:

flash back:

outside 1303 Ocean Avenue, the Torres brothers were ready to ring the bell. But before Ricardo doing so Antonio stopped him. “wait, Ricardo, before we go in there, I want you to promise me you’ll be on your best behaviour,” Antonio wanted to be sure with his brother. “now’s not the time T.” “look Ricardo then you keep quiet and I’ll do all the talking, knowing you- look Meg and Cummings deserve what they get, and I’m going to make sure they do,” Ricardo interrupted. “that’s what worries me,” Antonio mentions. “look T. if you don’t want me to talk then fine I won’t,” Ricardo said and rings the door bell.

Minutes later, Meg opened the door. Her blue eyes widened in surprise to see them, yet they could see she had fear in her eyes. “Ricardo, Antonio,” she says shocked, while Ricardo lowered his gaze knitting his teeth’s together to control his anger as he memorise flooded back. “hello Meg, can we come in?” Antonio asked politely.

“of course,” she let them through as they walked into the lounge and looked around. The place was empty, no Maria or Ben. “is Ben home?” Antonio questioned. “no he popped out to next door,” Meg answers. “you mean he left my nephew with you?” Ricardo asks, coldness in his voice as almost he believed Meg wasn’t fit enough to look after a six year old. Antonio throws a glaring look at his brother.

“no actually Benji’s a sleep,” Meg mentions. “right, well when is Ben going to back?” Antonio says. “probably now, he said he won’t be long.” “I see, well is it okay if we wait for him.” “sure,” Meg responds. “is there anything I can help you with?” Meg suggests. “I think you’ve done enough don’t you,” Ricardo replies giving Meg an unsatisfied look. If she was to be a bloke, his fist would have been on her face by now.

They heard footsteps from behind and realised Ben was back. “Ricardo, Antonio?” Ben says with frown on his forehead and his hands tucked into his trouser pocket. “Ben, they’re here to see you?” Meg says, but Ben doesn’t answer, while Antonio realised things weren’t great between the two. Ben was acting cold. “look Evans did Maria come here?” Ricardo asked. “as a matter of fact she did, however I didn’t have the pleasure to see her. Meg presumed I wasn’t home and told her so,” Ben said very calmly. “so you didn’t see Maria?” Antonio double made sure. “no, why is something wrong?” “no, she just left Maria with Paula without telling us where she was going,” Ricardo answers.

“well I’m sure she got home safely,” Meg adds, while Ben slowly turns and eyes Meg with a brooding dead look in his eyes. “right we should be off,” Antonio says as he realised things were really intense between both Ben and Meg. “yeah see you Evan,” Ricardo states with Ben still facing Meg. “Antonio?” Ben calls out. “yeah?” “let me know if Maria got home safely and also could you check if she’s okay for me,” Ben asks eyeing Meg as he did. “sure, I see you later.” “thank you…”



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Posted by: Rizia
Date posted: Mon Oct 16 9:00:12 2006
Message:

**** oh my god Leo they’re…” Emily was speechless looking at the sparkly diamond earrings that he presented to her in a gift box, while an unsatisfied look appeared on Sean’s face. “they must have cost a fortune,” Emily states as she begins to try them on. “ah your worth it,” Leo mentions smiling cutely at her. “well be careful sunshine, some might get the wrong impression,” Bette winked at Leo.

 

So I guess work is going good then Leo?” Sean asked. “you could say that, but I have dad to thank for that,” Leo says. He was grateful that he had a good relationship with his father unlike Sean. There was so much advantage in having a parent around you that you know would help you through no matter what. Although for Sean that wasn’t probably the case. There was only one way according to his father and that was the “Gregory Way.”

 

Well just remember son you have a lot to make up to me after dropping out of school,” AJ reminds Leo. “oh come on dad I thought I already told you why I did. I hated the course and besides- you lied to me Leo,” AJ interrupts making him aware. “I’m sorry,” he apologises. “yet I couldn’t be more proud of you as I am now.” “thanks dad,” Leo thanked him. “well I’ll see you back at work, shall we Bette,” AJ gestured for Bette to hold him by the arms. “well certainly and Ems, if Sean here doesn’t treat you fancy I’m sure little dimples will be happy to,” Bette says and departs with her fiancé.

 

“I thought little dimples Trey?” Leo questioned confused. “well your much cuter then him. Just look at these dimples when you smile,” Emily pinches him on the cheek. “well what can I say, I founded the great Dationel looks, me and my brother,” pronounces proud. “well it’s a shame we can’t say the same about your father,” Emily comments and they both burst into laughter while Sean only smiled bored. “well not everyone inherits good looks from their parents, look at Sean for instance,” Leo illustrates as Emily kept laughing. The only problem was Sean wasn’t finding it amusing. “his mums beautiful and his dad is alright looking, so what happened to him?”

 

maybe I’m grateful I have turned nothing like my parents especially my father,” Sean said seriously. “mate it was just I joke.” “not a very funny one.” “then maybe you should get yourself a sense of humour,” Leo suggests. Eyeing Leo for a few seconds Sean was ready to leave. “come Ems lets go,” Sean decides. “see you Leo, don’t take no notice of him,” she whispers to him. “oh before you go Emily I know you were working tonight at the deep. Well seeing its your birthday I was thinking maybe I can cover for you, so you can spend the evening with your man,” Leo suggests. “are you sure, you mean you don’t mind?” Emily double checks. “only of course your promise to return the favour for me.” “deal, oh thank you,” she kissed him on the cheek. “don’t mentions it..”

 

 

**** Antonio walks into the police station. He was surprised to see Gabi getting a refill of coffee. Her has gone longer to her shoulders. It suited her she looked better in longer hair, he thought. “Antonio!” Gabi took noticed of the handsome priest, while Antonio only smiled. Her dark eyes widened filled with happiness yet surprised. “what are you doing here?” she asked. “I didn’t know you walked here again?” “yeah I got my old job back,” Gabi informs him. “so I guess you’ll be working with Ricardo and your sister huh?” Antonio asked. “something like that. Its better to face my demons then pretend they don’t exist.” Antonio nodded. “just remember I’m here if you want to talk or if something’s bothering you. And take little steps instead of big ones.” She only smiled gratefully, sometimes how she wished Ricardo could be more like him. But she then remembers her conversation with Maria:

 

“Gabi listen to me, if you have feelings for Antonio you can not pretend they don’t exist that you can push them aside hoping they will disappear. Its going to come out in a most unexpected way, and all you going to do is not only hurt yourself but you will hurt both my brothers,” Maria explains.

 

“so what are you doing here then Father?” Gabi asked, reminding her that Antonio and she can never be. What Maria said was true. As far as she’s concerned she wanted Ricardo back despite there was some quality of Antonio she preferred and there was no ways she was going to allow her sister back into his life more then just friends. She couldn’t help herself but that side of selfishness and jealousness comes back every time she sees Paula. All the pain and competition she’d been through with her father, it scarred her deeply.

 

“actually I came to see Paula,” Antonio mentioned, while a frown appeared on Gabi’s face, thinking what for. But remembering that Paula lives with him and Maria, it could be for any reason. But it did make her wonder. “well she’s around somewhere,” Gabi says looking around, as Paula walked out one of the interviewing room, dressed a black jeans and a red armless V neck vest. She too had grown her black hair longer and for the first time the resemblance between both the sisters was obvious.

 

“Antonio hey,” Paula walked up to him. “what’s happened now?” she asked thinking more fireworks has sparked at the house. There was always a new story waiting for her when she got home from work. “nothing much, look your not busy are you?” Antonio asked her. “not really why?” “I need to talk to you about something.” Something was worrying Antonio she knew. “sure, come through here,” she walked in front of him as he followed her into one of the spare interview rooms…”

 

 

**** Casey remained quiet not knowing what to say to his mother. “well say something,” Alex wanted to know what Casey thought. “look Mum I know you and Gregory have a past together, I just don’t want him hurting you,” Casey mentions worried. “hey no one is going to hurt me, and besides the only person that’s going to be doing all the hurting is me,” Alex demands. “I just want you to be happy.” “he does make me happy…he and I we have a lot more in common then you’ll think.” “I know you do otherwise you wouldn’t be such good friends,” Casey mentions. “thank you honey you don’t know how much this means to me,” Alex says hugging him…

 

 

**** so what’s wrong?” Paula asked Antonio. “I’m just worried about Ricardo,” Antonio lets out. Paula was confused. “why, has something happened?” Antonio shakes his head not sure whether to tell Paula or not. “his taken the whole thing in getting even with the Cummings family deeply.” “how do you mean?” “I’m just worried because I don’t what he will do to them Paula. Look what he did to Ben. He made his life hell for almost five whole years, and what are chances of the Cummings get off lightly. I’m mean look what he did to me and Gabi,” Antonio comments. “its just seems to me his begging to live in the world of revenge and making sure he makes them pay one way or another. I’m actually surprised he has lasted this long.” “well maybe that’s a part of that’s changed. Maybe Ricardo has mellow down a little. Or it could be his not acting upon anything only not to hurt Maria,” Paula explains. “yeah maybe,” Antonio agrees.

 

“hey if it makes you feel better I’ll have word with him.” “I was hoping you would. We all need now and then someone to talk to and someone that understands us- in your case that’s Maria,” Paula interrupts. “and in Ricardo’s its you. You and Maria both understand him better then anyone else…”

 

 

**** walking into his beach house Ben looked around the place. “Meg!” he called out wondering his wife whereabouts. He found two cube boxes on the glass table with a note. He picked it up and read it. “Ben I had to rush to the sunset sisters, could you drop this to the mission for charity week, Meg.”

 

I suppose I could,” he thought to himself and decided on the way back he’ll see both the Maria’s. Wondering what Meg was going to give away Ben began to go through her things out of interest. There were a few old jewelleries and CD’s and some old special occasion cards. Picking them out he looked at them. They were probably the left over left from the thank you cards Meg had written for the wedding. although Maria went her way in putting a special touch to her thank you notes with a sketch of everyone she did that gave her present. But that’s Maria for you and only Maria would come up with something more.

 

He noticed two other cards blank on the front. Ben opens it up and it read “My darling love, being away from you this holiday weekend is more then I can bear. I can’t stand it when we’re apart even for a moment.” Ben was confused as he read it again.

 

“this looks like Maria’s hand writing,” Ben says to himself analysing the writing, as he a confused frown appeared on his face. What the hell is this doing with Megs old things? He questioned himself. He then looked at the second card and it read with the same hand writing, “I am just bursting with our secret dying to tell someone. But no one knows not even Annie.”

 

“what the hell?” Ben was more bombarded the even. This was too bizarre. What was this doing here with Meg things and what secret, Ben thought to himself. What secret was Maria keeping from everyone…


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